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How to Find Submission Opportunities in a Children's Book Publisher's Catalog

Before sending off your manuscript, it's essential that you study children's book publishers' lists to find the best fit for your manuscript. Your first stop is Children's Writer's & Illustrator's Market published by Writer's Digest Books. Note which publishers do the type of book you've written, and are also accepting submissions from new writers. Then send for a current catalog.

Let's look at the picture books from two hypothetical publishers:

Publisher A:

Total picture books: 26.
Picture books by type: 8 talking animal stories; 4 concept books; 2 realistic stories; 2 humorous stories; 2 fantasy; 1 holiday book (Easter); 3 nonfiction (2 animal/nature, 1 religion); 4 poetry collections.
Age range of books: 6 for ages 2-5, 12 for ages 4-7, 6 for ages 6-10.
Types of authors: Established authors (two or more books published)–5; famous authors (significant name recognition/ awards)–11; reissues of classic books–5 (3 poetry collections); new authors–5.
Percent of list from new authors: just over 19%.

Publisher B:

Total picture books:14
By type: 4 talking animals; 1 concept book; 2 realistic stories; 3 humorous stories; 4 nonfiction (history, biography).
Age range of books: 3 for ages 3-6; 11 for ages 4-8 or 4-9.
Types of authors: Established authors– 7; famous authors–3; new authors– 4.
Percent of list from new authors: 28.5%

Suppose you have a picture book featuring talking animal characters. Even though Publisher A has fewer new authors, it publishes a greater percentage of talking animal stories. And you really want Publisher A to do your book. Should you submit? First, look at the authors in Publisher A's stable. More than half are famous or authors of classic books (which means instant sales for the reissued editions). Plus, after studying the bios of the authors in the catalog, you discover that 3 out of the 5 new authors are either celebrities or renowned illustrators writing their first books. Clearly, this publisher prefers authors with some name-recognition. Does this mean you shouldn't submit here?

Not necessarily, but slide it down your list. Publisher B has a higher percentage of new authors (no celebrities and only one known illustrator), a fair number of animal stories, and a greater number of humorous books. Since your talking animal story has ironic humor that is likely to appeal to older picture book readers (who make up the majority of this publisher's audience), Publisher B looks like a good fit.

Other things we've learned: Publisher B favors books about history and real people, as indicated by the nonfiction titles and the fact that the realistic fiction books are both based on public figures (you'll learn this by reading the plot descriptions). So your picture book fiction incorporating real events set at the turn of the century might appeal to these editors.

On the other hand, Publisher A has published a holiday book and a religious book, whereas Publisher B has neither. So a religious picture book might fit best with Publisher A, unless the book is a biography of a religious leader.

Clearly, analyzing publishers' catalogs isn't an exact science, but it can help increase your chances of finding a good match with an editor down the road.

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How to Publish a Children's Book Even If You're a Non-Celebrity

Yep, it's frustrating. You work tirelessly on your manuscript, revise, re-write and revise again. You send it off to publishers and get a mailbox full of rejections. Meanwhile, some rock star or athlete gets a big money deal to write a children's book without lifting a finger.

Well, that's the way the world works. No need to get depressed. Just get to work. Non-celebrities get book deals every day. Here's how you can do the same.

Step 1: Learn the Rules.

If you're not famous, your children's book fiction or nonfiction manuscript or query letter takes the same path as the rest of the non-famous. It gets dropped, as part of a huge pile, on the desk of an underpaid, overworked editorial assistant (or a freelance reader). Her job is to sift through the pile of dross and find a few nuggets of gold, and then pass them on to an equally overworked and underpaid editor. The editor then reads through the smaller pile, pulls out the submissions that catch her eye, and brings them to an editorial meeting. If the overall consensus is "yes, this is a book we want to publish", you're on your way to partying it up with Madonna in the special "Children's Writers' VIP Lounge" at the Viper Room.

Buried in that timeline is some bad news, and some good news. First the bad news: The editorial assistant weeds out up to 95% of the submissions that arrive. In other words, the great majority of submissions to a publishing house never even make it to a person in a position to publish it. Why not? They may, of course, simply be awful submissions, laden with poor grammar, misspellings and hackneyed writing. They may be the clear work of amateurs, handwritten on lined paper with childish drawings. Or, and this is where there's some hope, they may simply get rejected because they're the less obvious work of amateurs.

More subtle things, such as using single spacing rather that double spacing, or a manuscript whose word count is out of kilter with the "norm" is sometimes all it takes for an EA to say "Beginner". Rejection."

So here's the good news: simply by learning the specific, but not wildly arcane, rules of children's publishing, you can leapfrog over the madding crowd. When an EA or reader sees a manuscript that comes from someone who clearly knows how it's done, they're far more likely to give it a fair reading, and far less squeamish about turning it over to the boss.

Step 2: Write to the Publisher's Needs.

The problem with many beginning children's book writers is that they have a specific idea from which they won't budge. To be honest, it's usually a pretty dumb idea and, even if it's halfway decent, chances are it's been done many times already. Look, I know your dream is to write that book about the talking scrubber brush and his sinkside pals, but put the dream on hold for a bit. The absolute best way to get published is to figure out what publishers want - and give it to them.

Here's an example: Schools desperately need fiction and nonfiction books that integrate into curricula. Publishers, thus, are eager to provide said books, as schools are big and dependable customers who are likely to buy directly from the publisher, offering even a better profit margin.

And you're response to this is..? Hopefully, it's "Hey, I'm gonna write some books that tie in with school curricula!"

This is just one example - publishers have all sorts of often unglamorous niches they need filled. How to find out? Send for their guidelines and catalog. Often, they're quite straightforward about their needs, other times you need to read between the lines of the catalog to figure it out. But the answer is usually there.

And, seriously, let's see Brad Pitt try to write an exciting thriller about the passage of the Smoot-Hawley Tariff Act.

Step 3: Learn to Craft a Great Query Letter.

Your query letter (used if you're submitting a few sample chapters of a longer manuscript) or cover letter (used to accompany and introduce a complete manuscript) is your chance to really earn the sale. Almost always, it's a wasted opportunity filled with irrelevance (I'm the mother of three and I've always dreamed of writing a children's book!), pleading (It would mean so much to me to have this book published!) and ludicrous assertions (Everyone tells me I'm the next J.K. Rowling!).

A good query letter is basically this: a powerful sales letter meant to convince a publisher that it is in its best interests to publish your book. Essentially, you need to tell them that your book fits their needs and will sell to their current market and will expand into new markets. Tell them, specifically, how you will be able to deliver readers (e.g. I have a weekly blog read by more than 30,000 parents and my website attracts 60,000 visitors a month) and how there is a defined need for your book and how you will reach the target customers (e.g. There are more than a half million foster children in America. These children, their foster parents and foster siblings need books like mine to help make sense of their situations. I will promote my book directly to them through organizations, conferences, newsletters and websites.)

To succeed in publishing, you must strip away the romantic nonsense you've been brought up with and see things as they are. Children's books aren't published by magical elves. They're published by business people (albeit, business people who, thankfully, often genuinely love the books they publish). Display to an editor that your book will be an artistic and financial success and you're taking a big step in the right direction.

Step 4: Write to an Existing, Underserved Market.

Sometimes the concept of writing to a publisher's needs can be turned on its head. Perhaps there's a sizeable, outstanding market that no one is serving and you can convince a publisher that its just the one to serve it. It could be anything - children of interracial marriage, girls who like jazz, boys who play piano, American kids who dig the game of cricket - if there are enough of them out there and are too few books for them to read, you may very well be introducing a publisher to a potentially lucrative market.

Do your research. Talk to trade associations, government experts, owners of websites that serve specific markets or anyone else who can give you some supporting backup on the size of your target group. Search Books in Print for already existing titles that target the group. Speak with librarians and booksellers to get their viewpoint on needs. And include it all in a great query letter.

Step 5: Listen to the Pros.

There's no need to go it alone. Take the time (and spend a few bucks) to listen to others who have made the journey. Writing conferences, workshops (visit wemakewriters.com for an excellent one), books and newsletters (such as Children's Book Insider) can dramatically increase your chances of getting published by helping you avoid typical mistakes and pitfalls.

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When Writing Fiction Children's Books, Simplicity is a Virtue

A student of mine recently thanked me for reminding her that query letters are most impactful when they’re short and to the point. A published writer, she said she’d strayed from the KISS method of querying (Keep It Simple, Stupid).

The more I thought about her acronym, the more I realized it applied to all aspects of writing children’s book fiction. When dealing with kids one-on-one, we grownups often give them information on a need-to-know basis. When asked, “Why do I have to change my socks every day?” we could go into detail about germs or proper hygiene, but instead answer, “Because you’re starting to stink.” It gets the point across with minimal verbiage. And that age-old parental justification –”Because I said so”–sometimes is the only reason needed.

So why do we get so complex when writing for children? Why do our picture book plots span several weeks and contain characters with large extended families and numerous friends? Why do our magazine articles attempt to cram a subject’s entire life into 800 words? Kids are masters of cutting through the fog and getting right to the point. Here are some ways we can learn from our audience:

* Cut back on adjectives and adverbs. If your nouns and verbs are strong, you won’t need to add extra words to describe them. "He trudged up the hill" says the exact thing as "He walked slowly and steadily up the hill, placing his feet heavily with each step", only more directly. Instead of describing a house as huge, grand, or enormous, let your character do it with one word: Jason gazed at Grandma’s house. “It’s a castle,” he thought. A single, well-chosen noun draws a picture in your reader’s mind better than several general adjectives.

* Write your plot direction in one sentence. In our Children’s Authors’ Bootcamp workshops, Linda Arms White and I teach writing a story line as a tool for plotting (This a story about __________, who wants more than anything to ________, but can’t because ____________.) This story line identifies the main character, his/her greatest goal, and what’s standing in the way of the character achieving that goal. Regardless of the length of your story, the age group, or whether you have subplots and chapters, the story line works to keep the action of your plot on track. The key: Keep it to one sentence (there’s no wiggle room on this one).

What if you’re not writing about your character achieving his greatest goal, or its flip side, your character avoiding facing his greatest fear? A plot about something your character sort of wants isn’t good enough. A conflict involving a minor annoyance isn’t as compelling as a life- changing event. Maybe your character is up against so many obstacles that the reader can’t figure out which one is the most important. As the author, you need to boil your story down to the one aspect of your character’s life that’s going to take center stage for the remainder of the book. Remember, you’re not writing about your character’s entire existence, just the period of time covered byencapsulated in your story. One goal shines above the rest. All subplots and secondary characters are stepping stones toward that goal. Some lead your character in the right direction, some take detours, but all ultimately end up in the same place.

* Give your reader only the information he required right now. Don’t throw in details about a character unless it’s directly related to the current action of the story. This often happens with secondary characters, who suddenly develop a phobia or acquire an annoying sibling in the middle of a scene. Such dangling attributes feel contrived and only raise distracting questions in the reader’s mind. The same goes for a character’s life before the story began. We generally don’t need to know the past of every person who appears in the book. Reveal as much information as the reader must have to understand what’s happening at each point of the plot, and cut the rest.

* Use the “need-to-know” philosophy with query letters. When composing a query letter or cover letter to an editor, include only the information an editor needs to judge whether he or she may be interested in reading your manuscript. Your motivation for writing the story doesn’t matter; your ability to summarize the plot in a few sentences does. Your experience as a parent or grandparent doesn’t guarantee you’ll write a strong article; your adherence to the magazine’s word limit shows you’ve done your research. Editors are busy people who love short letters with lots of white space. Respect the simplicity of presenting your work with minimal buildup and letting your manuscript speak for itself.

Above all, keep your message clear and age-appropriate. A picture book about poverty is too broad and abstract for a six-year-old to understand, but a story about a child who is embarrassed because she gets free lunch at school is more specific. Whatever age you’re writing for, use one well- defined character to represent the bigger issue. Smaller, intimate stories are more relevant to the reader. Nonfiction that shows the reader how the topic relates to his life, or focuses on one aspect of a subject, makes a greater impact. And remember, if you want your manuscript to sell, start with a KISS.

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