Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Why Children's Book Publishers Are Rejecting Your Manuscript -- And How to Fix It!

Here's our quick look at the most common reasons editors at children's book publishers reject manuscripts, and some smart ways to fix them.





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November Being Touted as Picture Book Month

Last October, an article in The New York Times declared, “Picture Books No Longer A Staple for Children”. This incited a barrage of responses from the children’s book industry, many in defense of the venerable picture book.


Thus, Picture Book Month was born. Founder Dianne de Las Casas decided it was time to celebrate picture books in their traditional printed format so she created an initiative to designate November as “Picture Book Month.” Katie Davis, Elizabeth Dulemba, Tara Lazar, and Wendy Martin came on board to champion the cause and spread the word. A logo was designed by Joyce Wan. A website (www.picturebookmonth.com) was created to feature essays from “Picture Book Champions,” thought leaders in the children’s literature community. Each day in November, a new essay will be posted from such notable contributors as Suzanne Bloom, Denise Fleming, Leslie Helakoski, Eric A. Kimmel, Tammi Sauer, Dan Yaccarino, and Jane Yolen.Better World Books and organizations like Scholastic Book Fairs Philippines are lending their support. The website will also feature links to picture book resources, authors, illustrators, and kidlit book bloggers. In addition, parents, educators, and librarians can download the theme calendar to help them plan their picture book celebrations and access picture book activities.


Visit www.picturebookmonth.com. The website officially opens on November 1, 2011.




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When Moms Blog, Publishers Notice

These days, instead of digging through the slush pile, many editors are turning to the blogosphere for their next big book. And the newest group to catch the eye of the children's book industry is known as Mom Bloggers. A recent article in Publishers Weekly highlighted how Simon & Schuster hosted 29 of the most popular mom bloggers at a luncheon complete with authors and goodie bags. Why all the fuss? Because moms blog about the books they're reading with their kids, and other moms listen.


But publishers don't rely on mom bloggers to simply spread the word about new books. They also look to them to help create future titles. Editors like Kate Jackson of HarperCollins peruse blogs on a regular basis, looking for writing talent and book ideas. These bloggers are also willing to spread the word on self-published books (sometimes their own), that then catch an editor's eye.


There are two lessons here for both aspiring and published authors: One, don't ignore these mom bloggers when sending out review copies or planning your next blog tour. And two, blogging about children's books, and doing it well, clearly gets you on the publishing radar. This might end up being easier (and more fun) than sending out multiple unsolicited submissions and hoping to get noticed.

 




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The Difference a Book Cover Makes

We're not supposed to judge a book by its cover, but that's a bunch of baloney. The cover is our first impression, and it goes a long way toward determining if we're going to open the book and read the first page. Consumers know this, booksellers know this, and presumably publishers know this as well.


Which is why it's so baffling when a book has a terrible cover. I'm thinking in particular of middle grade and young adult novels, where the cover is the only illustration the reader sees. Why are so many of them misleading (looking dark and moody when the book isn't), inaccurate (ever seen a book where the protagonist depicted on the cover looks nothing like the author's description?), or just plain ugly? And to the teens and tweens who grew up in our visually-oriented culture, a bad cover says "This book isn't worth reading."


In her Publishers Weekly blog, bookseller Elizabeth Bluemle offers some cover tips for publishers, and self-publishers should also take note. One great idea: show a pdf of the proposed cover to a few booksellers and get their yes or no before the book is published. It's really a no-brainer: publishers get feedback from the people who see consumers' reactions first-hand, and sellers get books that help sell themselves. If you're self-publishing, you should be building relationships with local bookstore owners anyway, and asking for their quick opinion shows that you respect their expertise. This will only help when the time comes for them to carry your book in their stores.


 




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Monday, October 17, 2011

Writing Picture Books 101

Many newcomers believe it's simple to write picture books, but it actually requires a lot of skill to pack a story into a few words. If your dreams include writing a picture book, here are some tips to consider before you begin:



 

* Keep it simple. You should be able to sum up the plot of your picture book in three sentences. Not every detail, of course, but the broad strokes. Create one sentences to capture the beginning (naming your main character and the problem or conflict he’ll face in the story), one for the middle (describing the gist of the efforts your character makes to solve his problem), and one for the end (how he finally resolves the conflict and reaches his goal). If three sentences doesn’t capture the essence of your plot, then it’s probably too complex for a picture book.



Note: You’re concerned here on plot (the action of the story), rather than theme (the underlying message). Don’t get into describing theme while you’re summarizing your plot. The theme shouldn’t even be an issue at this point. You want to construct the story so the character’s actions, and how he transforms because of those actions, presents a lesson to your readers.



 

* Think in pictures. The term “picture books” says it all: the illustrations are equally as important as the words. The average picture book is 32 pages long, with about four pages of front matter (title page, copyright page, etc.) So you have 28 pages of text and illustration. If you aim for 1000 words to tell your story (the average length of picture book text), that gives you about 36 words per page (some pages will have more words, some less, depending on the pacing of your story). While you don’t want to obsess over precise word counts when you’re writing early drafts of your manuscript, do keep in mind that every page of your book needs to inspire a different illustration. So count out 36 words from your manuscript and note how large a chunk of text that is on the page. That’s about how many words you can devote to each illustration. After that, your characters have to do something— move around, change locations— so the illustrator will have a new picture to draw.



One way to think visually is to convey the character’s problem, and her efforts to solve that problem, in concrete, visual terms. If your character is having trouble memorizing facts for school, that all takes place inside her head. But if she’s embarrassed because she can’t swim, then her attempts to learn are easily illustrated.



Note: Some illustrations will span two facing pages, called a two-page spread. In this case, you’ll have about 70 words for that one illustration. But picture books are a mix of single page illustrations and two-page spreads, so keep the action moving at a good pace.



 

* Maintain a childlike outlook. Picture book characters can be children, adults, animals or fantasy characters. But all main characters must embody the sensibilities of a child between the ages of 4-8. As a result, the problem your characters faces needs to be relevant and important to your target audience. The way your character tackles that problem must fit with the way a child would tackle it. Don’t create an adult main character just so you can impose some adult wisdom on your readers. Grown-up characters using the emotional, illogical and sometimes messy coping strategies of children can be a very effective, and funny, storytelling technique. Above all, the character must be the one to solve the problem, using methods that are accessible to children. If readers see themselves in your main character, then they’ll understand the underlying message of your story.





* Get the Right Advice.  We've got a free eBook mini guide that can really help separate fact from fiction. It's called "Getting Started Writing Children's Picture Books" and you can get a copy right now by going to http://cbiclubhouse.com/free-ebook/



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Laura Backes is the Publisher of Children's Book Insider, the Newsletter for Children's Writers.  For much more about writing for children, visit Laura at http://cbiclubhouse.com  To learn more about writing picture books, visit http://cbiclubhouse.com/free-ebook/ to get your free copy of "Getting Started Writing Children's Picture Books".

Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Children's Book Apps - An Exciting New Way to Get Published

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It's time to reveal our super-secret project:  Write4Kids! TV.   It's a web video channel devoted exclusively to writing children's books, and will feature video interviews with authors, editors and publishing visionaries.  It's completely free and is certain to become must-viewing for anyone interested in creating children's books.



Right now, the very first episode is up, and it's a doozy. Join me for an exclusive chat with Karen Robertson, author of Treasure Kai and the Lost Gold of Shark Island and creator of an amazing eBook called Author's Guide to Book Apps.



Karen has a great story:  about a year ago, she decided to create an iPad app for her book.  She's a self-described "total non-techie", but she taught herself how to do everything.  Her journey turned out to be more fun and less expensive than she imagined.  Now she's become an evangelist for writers to create and sell their own
children's book apps and, to prove that absolutely anyone can do it, she's created a step-by-step roadmap that shows exactly how to make it happen (and she's teamed up with us to offer it at a special price).



Apps are super-hot right now and can offer exposure and, yes, profit for writers, whether they've been previously published or not. 



In our chat, Karen shares exactly what apps are and how they're sold.  It's a meaty conversation that will leave you feeling confident that, in fact, you can do it.








Write4Kids! TV








Go check out "Children's Book Apps Made Easy" at http://Write4Kids.tv







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Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Did Piracy Just Create a #1 Best Seller?

So, just the other day we offered up our new ebook The Problem Isn't Piracy, the Problem Is Obscurity and now we look like freaking geniuses.  :)


To recap, Cory Doctorow's essays, as reprinted in The Problem Isn't Piracy... argue that authors should chill about people copying and downloading their books online, because, ultimately, the added exposure will help sell printed copies of the book.  Not everyone, to put it mildly, sees things that way.


Well score one for Cory.  I give you the current #1 best selling book on Amazon.com:



Go the F**k TO Sleep is a picture book parody and it's a pretty funny idea.  But here's what's really fascinating about it:


PDF copies of the book (which won't be released in print until June) have been floating around the Internet for months.  Booksellers and publishing industry insiders have been sending copies of the book around and the buzz kept getting louder and louder.   Loud enough to drive the book to the top of the charts weeks before its release and without a shred of promotion from its publisher.


So what do we learn from this?


1. Having people talk about your book is a good thing, no matter how it gets started


2. Even if they're given ebooks for free, readers still want print editions of  Illustration-heavy books (Gawker.com opines "Books with artwork have a tactile, archival appeal lacking in the latest Grisham potboiler, say.")


3. Having a great title and easy to grasp concept is always a winning combination when it comes to viral attention.


 


Forget this specific book, and whether you appreciate the language or the joke.  That's not relevant.  But pay close attention to what happened here -- a book was "pirated" and the treasure ended up in the hands of the "victim". 


Maybe, just maybe, it's time to change the terminology a bit. 


 


'Go the F--- to Sleep': The Case of the Viral PDF


How Viral Copies of a Naughty Bedtime Book Changed Publishing


'Go the F--- to Sleep': The Case of the Viral PDF

Source: The Bay Citizen (http://s.tt/12pUA)





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Monday, May 16, 2011

The Writer's Mindset: Many Eggs, Many Baskets

Let's continue our series of quick videos about developing a success-oriented mindset with a chat about the way successful writers approach their careers.  The key:  avoiding the "all or nothing" syndrome.


 





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Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Book Marketing Idea: This is Kind of Brilliant, Actually

Book marketing keeps changing, and genius new ideas keep popping up.  Here's one I really like:


"I need your help naming my new book..."


The link takes you to a video from a fellow named Frank Kern.  You may not know him, but he's pretty much the Lada Gaga of internet marketing. A real superstar.


Anyway, Kern's piece of book promotion for his upcoming title is so simple, so smart and so unique I wanted to bring it to your attention.  Go watch the video and you'll get a three minute masterclass.  See how beautifully it's shot, even though it seems homemade.  Notice Frank's demeanor (his pesona -- which, by all accounts, is authentic --  is "laid back surfer dude") and how soft the sell is.


The end result of this little bit of book promotion?  He gets early buzz for his book, he makes at least 1000 people feel invested in the book's creation, he manages to get his distribution of teaser copies of the book subsidized and he builds a personal bond with potential buyers.


Think about how you can use this technique for your own benefit.


"I need your help naming my new book..."




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Tuesday, May 10, 2011

The Book is Alive, Well, and Often Self-Published

It seems that reports of the death of books have been greatly exaggerated (with apologies to Mark Twain). As the numbers continue to roll in, it's clear that people still read, more titles are being published than ever, and e-books are taking their place alongside print books, not replacing them. As reported in "Is the Book Dead? Let That Myth Rest in Peace" from The Atlantic, 288,355 new and reissued titles were published in 2009, and Bowker (the data agency for publishing) speculates that the numbers will be higher in 2010 and 2011. And -- here's a really astounding statistic -- an additional 764,448 titles fell into the self-published, micro-niche and print-on-demand categories.


Think about that for a moment. For the first time in publishing history, authors are self-publishing more books than publishing houses are producing. Considering that these numbers are over a year old, and advances in e-publishing are happening faster than you can download an app from the iStore, 2011 could potentially near the one million mark in self-published titles.


Upon hearing this, many seasoned authors (read: those with several traditionally-published books under their belts) worry about the lack of gate-keepers. If so many people are self-publishing (and publishers are paying attention to successful self-published efforts, as described in this Publishers Weekly article), who's going to decide what's good? Who's going to create the buzz, tell us what to buy? Without the taste-makers, how will we know what to read?


It's a seismic change, to be sure. And like all changes, it feels a bit scary. But the answer boils down to one word: you.


You, as the consumer, get to decide with your dollars what constitutes a good book. Sure, book buyers always voted with their purchases, but the pool of choices was limited by what publishers presented. And publishers often make decisions based on non-artistic criteria: Does this book cash in on a current trend? Is the market broad enough to make a substantial profit? Will it stay on the shelves of Barnes & Noble for more than three months? Is the author a celebrity? Many great books get published each year, but just as many great books get rejected because they don't quite fit the corporate plan. Readers have never had the opportunity to decide for themselves if those books deserve to exist. Now they can.


You, as the author, still have to put in the work, learning how to write, learning how to revise, and learning how to communicate with your audience. That age-old truth won't change. But now, after you've workshopped the manuscript, had it professionally edited and gotten the go-ahead from your writers' group, you have the power to see your words in print. Since self-publishing is rapidly losing its stigma as the last resort for rejected authors, you have a real choice of submitting to publishers or producing the book yourself. You also now have a choice of paper or electronic formats. Low-cost and no-cost options for e-books mean you can make your dream a reality without a trust fund.


You, as the publicist for your book, can generate reviews, create a buzz, connect with readers and set up personal appearances in direct proportion to the amount of time you're willing to devote to marketing. You're not limited by the publisher's marketing dollars going to the big authors, or the New York Times' limited space in their book review section. The internet is the great equalizer, giving authors the same access to their audience as publishers have had. The more you reach out, the more sales you'll see. It's that simple.


The book is far from dead, and the opportunities for authors are more plentiful than ever. The only difference is that now both authors and consumers have more choices, which means they're responsible for deciding what constitutes a worthy book. As an author, you now have options: you can go the time-honored route of submitting to agents and publishers, waiting months for a reply, and hoping you're one of the lucky ones who gets a book contract. Then you can hope your book sells enough to get contract #2. Many authors still find success and fulfillment this way, and if you're one of those, then I'm looking forward to seeing your book on the shelves. But if you're tired of waiting, you believe in your book and you're not afraid to do the work necessary to get it out there, then for the first time you have equal (or very close) access to book production and marketing as the big publishers. And it's only going to get easier.


So make your choice. Your readers are waiting.




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Book Industry, Meet the Record Industry. Meet Your Future.

Over at the Yahoo Children's Writing Group, someone asked me for an opinion about the future of publishing houses in the new e-publishing age. Some of you may find it interesting, so I'll reprint it here:

 


I'd look to the music industry for answers, as it experienced this same turmoil
a decade ago. And (mostly) they blew it.


The new media environment begs for curators -- trusted sources who can sift
through the dross and deliver quality. Once upon a time, that's exactly what
record labels were. Atlantic delivered quality east coast soul, Elektra had its
finger on the pulse of the L.A. scene, Sire was the champion of the New York and
London new wave, etc. But as mega-conglomerates bought up the record labels,
they lost their identities. Go ahead an tell me what Sony or Warner or EMI
stand for musically today? You can't, because they're not curators, they're
giant distribution funnels for any kind of music they think can sell.


But here's the rub: the distribution of music got yanked out right from under
them, thanks to the Internet. So now what is their purpose?


The same thing is happening in publishing now. Large publishers aren't viewed
as trusted sources of quality books in specific genres/age groups. Think about
it -- when was the last time the publisher's name on the spine of a book gave
you reason to think a book was good or not?


Now, as book stores become less important, and anyone can get worldwide
distribution of their ebook via Amazon with a click of the mouse, what's the
future of the big houses?


My suggestion for them: Use (or create) imprints to market to niches, and hire
the best editors you can. Stand for quality within each niche and nothing but.
Then, invest in social marketing geniuses and give every book you publish and
every author with whom you work complete and comprehensive marketing support.


Group authors together for multi-author blogs and school visit "teams".


Next, consider the Godin/Doctorow "free" model and convince authors it's in
their best interests to give some ebooks away with an eye toward spurring word
of mouth and print sales (this would be an excellent approach for picture books,
IMHO, as paper will still be desirable in that realm for a long while). (and
for goodness sakes, don't sue your customers over copyright the way the record
industry did. You can't scare people into refusing to accept technology. YOU
have to adapt to new realities, not ask your customers to travel back in time.)


One last point toward your comment about "star authors" -- This is a new reality
where ANY author can become a star. Build a huge Twitter following, a loyal
blog readership, an active Facebook fan page and guess what? You're a star, and
you'll have legit leverage with publishers.

Tuesday, April 26, 2011

The Difference Between Being an "Author" and a "Writer" - And Why It Matters

The Successful Writer's Mindset - Part 2


 


In this video, Jon explains why knowing the difference between being a writer and an author is vital - and which label newcomers should embrace.


 



 


 


Related:  The Successful Writer’s Mindset – Part One

Thursday, April 14, 2011

Wow - ebook sales post HUGE jump in Feb. *http://amplify.com/u/bz3cc

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Young Adult Notes: Why Today's Kids Seem So Comfortable With One Another

young adult writing tip


Young Adult Writing Tip - Today's Kids


Actually Like Each Other!  :)


 


When I was 14, I was terrified of three things:  heights, vegetables and girls.  Thankfully, I got over the last two, although I'm still not a fan of tall places.


If I were to write a young adult story about a similar young man with those fears living in today's world, my teenage readers may nod in understanding with the the first two concerns, but scratch their heads at the last one.   That's because, for many kids, the barriers that used to exist between the sexes, between social cliques and even between grade levels are far less a concern than they were when we were young.


Laura and I have been taking our 15 year old music nut to a bunch of concerts to see artists popular with his age group. (An aside - go see My Chemical Romance, they're really, really good.)  At these shows, one thing strikes you straight away -- these kids all act like they know each other.  Giant groups of kids mingle together, hug one another and act as if they've been buddies all their lives.


Now, when I was a kid going to shows (and no, it wasn't to see Al Jolson and Enrico Caruso, smart ass), that would never happen.  I went with my boys and we didn't mix with anyone.  It was an arena filled with thousands of small tribes, all eyeing one another warily.  But take any bunch of teenagers today, toss 'em in a room and it's kumbiya time.




I asked my son about this and he had a simple answer:  these kids -- who have never met in person -- already know each other via Facebook.  They're online friends, or they're friends of friends and thus, they're buddies.  Typical exchange:


Kid 1:  "Hey, what school do you go to?"


Kid 2: "West High in Murphystown."


Kid: "I go to South High in Elmwood. But I'm Facebook friends with Joe Smith from West High."


Kid 2:  "Cool.  Joe's a great guy.  What's your name?"  (Gets name, whips out smart phone, befriends Kid 1.  They are now pals.)


 


Now of course there are other reasons than social media to explain the higher comfort level teenagers have with one another today, and I'm certain there are still no shortage of alienated kids and teens who get tongue-tied around the opposite sex, but the point is this:  If you think that alienation from peers is anywhere near as prevalent among young adults as it was back in your day, you need to do some more observation.  Go to some concerts, wander around the mall, stay out the way and watch the way your readers connect with one another. 


You'll get a better understanding of your market -- and you may even start feeling a little bit better about our future.  In a world where fear and mistrust tend to get all the attention, it's nice to know that today's enemies may be tomorrow's Facebook friends.


 




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Monday, April 11, 2011

#YA Writers - Pay Attention to This! *http://amplify.com/u/byu0m

Thursday, April 7, 2011

Attn: CA & TX children's writers! *http://amplify.com/u/by8gc

Monday, March 28, 2011

2010 Children's Book Sales Figures *http://amplify.com/u/bwu5e

Friday, March 25, 2011

Easy Social Marketing Guide for Authors *http://amplify.com/u/bwjsm

Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Create an iPad compatible eBook for free *http://amplify.com/u/bvx7e
Battle Over Library eBook Loans #writing *http://amplify.com/u/bvx2w
Chat w/YA fantasy author Alma Alexander *http://amplify.com/u/bvx18

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Children’s Book Apps Dominate @ iPhone *http://amplify.com/u/btlzo

Monday, March 7, 2011

Do You Need Kids to Write for Kids? *http://amplify.com/u/btf9x

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Writing for Kids: How To Create Compelling Adult Characters

Writing a picture book? If you're planning to have adult characters, you'll need to avoid some common traps. This quick video provides some models for creating compelling and original grownup characters.


 



 




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Agent Gives Advice on Developing Characters | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/bripb

Monday, February 21, 2011

New Blog Inspires and Promotes Authors and Illustrators | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/br6v8

Monday, February 14, 2011

ePublishing from the Inside.... #writing *http://amplify.com/u/aq94j
Author Finds Agent, and Publisher, Through Self-ePublishing | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/aq922
Building Your Tribe of Readers | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/aq91z
Agents Reveal Their Chapter 1 Pet Peeves | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/aq91v
Pinpointing the Difference Between Middle Grade and YA | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/aq91s

Thursday, January 27, 2011

A Publishing CEO’s Take on the Future of His Industry | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/ansm2
Writers - How Do You Feel About the eBook Revolution? *http://amplify.com/u/anslx

Tuesday, January 25, 2011

What Publishers Need To Know About Making Enhanced eBooks - eBookNewser *http://amplify.com/u/anmhx
This *may* be the future of picture books | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/anmf1
Writers: Bring Your Setting Alive with Virtual Travel | Write4Kids! *http://amplify.com/u/anmey
The Search for the Girl Scientist in Literature *http://amplify.com/u/anmei
A publishing CEO's Advice to First-Time Authors *http://amplify.com/u/anme8